Your gentle style sucks the reader in, witness to the implosion of a life and the start of a journey of redemption for another. You managed the pain on both sides of the fence, indeed a master. Thank you for sharing your story.
You are a master of writing about conflict in relationships and emotion. This one drew me in with almost the first sentence. I look forward to reading the rest.
Wow guys, thank you! I'm honored by your comments! I didn't even realize this was publicly accessible yet. :P I'm still getting organized.
That’s an excellent start to a very promising story! I’m glad I found you.
What a start! I came across this story when someone I admire shared it. Absolutely heart wrenching!
Your gentle style sucks the reader in, witness to the implosion of a life and the start of a journey of redemption for another. You managed the pain on both sides of the fence, indeed a master. Thank you for sharing your story.
When an author can make the angst leap off the pages like this, I know I've found a winner.
Angst is near and dear to my heart. You'll find it common around here.
So good at it. Love this story!
I’m in! Wow, your details and character development are amazing. My heart aches for both Breck and Trace already. Subscribed!
Damm poor Breck...
Yeah. I hit him pretty hard.
You are a master of writing about conflict in relationships and emotion. This one drew me in with almost the first sentence. I look forward to reading the rest.